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Micro Miniature Miniscule Minute Screenplays
August 18th, 2012 by paul peditto
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Teaching a recent course at Columbia  in Micro-Budget film-making, I went shopping for books on the subject. It was surprising to find just how little had been written, not on the art of making movies on the cheap, but on WRITING them with cheap in mind. In other words, primed for a micro-budget budget and shooting schedule.

The book I went with was the excellent Fast, Cheap, And Under Control. There are interviews the with the writers and/or directors of movies you’ve heard of (Eraserhead, Slacker, El Mariachi, Clerks, The Blair Witch Project) and those not quite as well known (David Holtzman’s Diary, Symbiopsychotaxiplasm: Take One). What’s remarkable when reading the accounts and writing for low-budget and then shooting are the similarities. I’ve already documented some similarities in another post, but here’s a quick rundown:

      1. LIMIT LOCATIONS
      2. LIMIT CHARACTERS
      3. LIMIT SFX & STUNTS
      4. WRITE FOR LOW BUDGET GENRES THAT SELL
      5. WRITE LONGER DIALOGUE SCENES
      6. WRITE FOR A REALISTIC BUDGET
      7. WRITE LOCATIONS & RESOURCES AVAILABLE TO YOU
      8. BEWARE OVER-RELIANCE ON POST-PRODUCTION DIGITAL SOLUTIONS
      9. BEWARE WEATHER AND SEASONS
      10. BEWARE CASTING CHILDREN, ANIMALS
      11. BEWARE SEX SCENES, EXTERIOR NIGHT SHOTS, SPECIAL PROP OR MAKEUP NEEDS
      12. STORY IS FREE (VIA JOHN AUGUST)

All these are well and good, but how about some specifics. One way to study micro-budget movies is to examine LOCATIONS within these movies, and the choices made by the writer on what to use, and what not to use. We can do this with a Final Draft Location breakdown. For instance, this one on PI.

PI-SCREENPLAY — LOCATION REPORT

MAX’S APARTMENT (9 OCCURRENCES)

EXT (3)

EXT. MAX’S APARTMENT – DAY (1)  P.34

EXT. MAX’S APARTMENT – DUSK (1)         P.61

EXT. MAX’S APARTMENT – NIGHT (1)       P.79

INT (6)

INT. MAX’S APARTMENT – DAY (4) P.34

INT. MAX’S APARTMENT – NIGHT (2)       P.86

BLINDING WHITE VOID (4 OCCURRENCES)

Blank scene intro (4)

BLINDING WHITE VOID (4)   P.52

SOL’S APARTMENT (4 OCCURRENCES)

EXT (3)

EXT. SOL’S APARTMENT – DAWN (1)         P.42

EXT. SOL’S APARTMENT – MORNING (1)   P.48

EXT. SOL’S APARTMENT – NIGHT (1)        P.93

INT (1)

INT. SOL’S APARTMENT – DUSK (1) P.73

COFFEE SHOP (3 OCCURRENCES)

INT (3)

INT. COFFEE SHOP – DAY (2)  P.9

INT. COFFEE SHOP – NIGHT (1)       P.71

SOL’S STUDY (3 OCCURRENCES)

EXT (1)

EXT. SOL’S STUDY – MOMENTS LATER (1)         P.17

INT (2)

INT. SOL’S STUDY – DAY (1)  P.27

INT. SOL’S STUDY – MOMENTS LATER (1)         P.45

BATHROOM (2 OCCURRENCES)

INT (2)

INT. BATHROOM – DAWN (2) P.1

CHINATOWN (2 OCCURRENCES)

EXT (2)

EXT. CHINATOWN – DAY (2)  P.4

CITY STREETS (2 OCCURRENCES)

EXT (2)

EXT. CITY STREETS – DAY (1) P.93

EXT. CITY STREETS – NIGHT (1)      P.80

For brevity’s sake I left out other locations with two or less instances including the Electronic Megadump, which conjures up all sorts of images one could only associate with a movie like PI. Aronofsky made this, his first, movie for $60,000. He lay the groundwork for being able to make the movie happen right in the screenplay with his strict limitation of locations. Here, it’s all places we can get for nothing or next to nothing: Two apartments (Max and Sol), a Study, a Bathroom, a Coffee Shop, City Streets and Chinatown scenes, and of course the Blinding White Void. Only Aronofsky, right?

Want an even more extreme example. Look at the Report for Clerks:

CLERKS-SCREENPLAY — LOCATION REPORT

DAY (30 OCCURRENCES)

EXT: CONVENIENCE STORE (7)

EXT: CONVENIENCE STORE. DAY (7)        P.73

EXT: FUNERAL PARLOR (2)

EXT: FUNERAL PARLOR. DAY (2)      P.86

EXT: VIDEO STORE (1)

EXT: VIDEO STORE. DAY (1)   P.45

INT: BACK ROOM (1)

INT: BACK ROOM. DAY (1)       P.34

INT: CONVENIENCE STORE (15)

INT: CONVENIENCE STORE. DAY (15)       P.40

INT: VIDEO STORE (4)

INT: VIDEO STORE. DAY (4)   P.67

NIGHT (17 OCCURRENCES)

EXT: CONVENIENCE STORE (3)

EXT: CONVENIENCE STORE. NIGHT (3)    P.87

EXT: VIDEO STORE (4)

EXT: VIDEO STORE. NIGHT (4)        P.127

INT: CONVENIENCE STORE (8)

INT: CONVENIENCE STORE. NIGHT (8)    P.118

INT: VIDEO STORE (2)

INT: VIDEO STORE. NIGHT (2)        P.106

MORNING (8 OCCURRENCES)

EXT: CONVENIENCE STORE (4)

EXT: CONVENIENCE STORE. MORNING (4)        P.3

INT: CONVENIENCE STORE (4)

INT: CONVENIENCE STORE. MORNING (4)        P.4

90%+ of this movie takes place in the convenience and video stores! With the exception of a couple of apartment scenes, a car scene, and the two quick exteriors outside the Funeral Home, it’s ALL at the stores. This, of course, the same store Kevin Smith was working at at the time. The movie was filmed when the store was closed (check the DVD for some hilarious commentary). Cost of all locations? Zero. As in 0$. When you learn you can film at the store, you then write it into the script. It’s how a movie as influential as Clerks can be made for $27,000.

A study of the best of Micro-Budget and Indy screenplays can yield terrific lessons when you’re starting from scratch, trying to carve out a name for yourself. Read Spike Lee’s journal of the making of She’s Got To Have It. Absolutely fortifying to know Spike Lee, back in the day, struggled to make rent, hit his mother up for money, annoyed and pissed his friends off with money requests, anything to get his first movie made. We’re talking about less than $50,000 dollars, again. He honed down the script, rewriting over and over, until it was realistically do-able at micro-budget level.

David Lynch took years to make the sub $30,000 Eraserhead. He had a paper route and grabbed unused sound and film stock from dumpsters. Cassavetes made other people’s movies to get the cash to make his own low budget films. Orson Wells made wine commercials. Rodriguez sold himself for medical experiments.

If you have to whore yourself, make sure your script is freakin’ in the bag. No flies. You might only get one chance to ride down that moonlight mile…

Make it count.

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