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Beating Down Your Protagonist (Part 2)
Mar 28th, 2012 by paul peditto

Last week we talked about beating down your protagonist–manipulation of audience emotion through them connecting to your characters. One sure way for them to connect is to have them identify with the character, and then

mercilessly,

relentlessly,

beat them down.

Many movies have done this in many ways. I showed some examples last week that might be instructive to show again:

  1. Nature or natural forces (Titanic, 2012, Twister, The Poseidon Adventure )
  2. An antagonist of far greater strength makes life miserable or causes death and destruction(The Devil Wears Prada, The Crow)
  3. War-time abuse (Schindler’s List, The Deer Hunter, Saving Private Ryan)
  4. Addiction (The Lost Weekend, Days Of Wine And Roses, Black Snake Moan)
  5. Mental illness (The Miracle Worker, Sling Blade)
  6. A crippling or death-dealing accident (Diving Bell and the Butterfly, 21 Grams)
  7. Brainwashing (The Manchurian Candidate)
  8. Loss of job or bad economic conditions (Falling Down, The Grapes Of Wrath)
  9. Religious oppression (Ben Hur, The 10 Commandments, The Rapture)

This list is in no way complete, just a scratch of the surface. Slam the character throughout, grab us by the throat and never let go. Have us not just root for the characters, but live and breathwith them:

  • Carrie

Tarantino has made a career on beating down characters in revenge fantasies. Horror movies punish the antagonist in backstory, molding them into that damn hockey mask, then have a bunch of characters that we maybe care about run around trying to survive. With Carrie, they all deserve to die, we’re rooting for it. That’s called 80 minutes of beat down before the final 15 minutes of blood lust revenge.

  • 40 Year-Old Virgin

It’s not always drama where the beat down occurs. This poor guy gets it from every side, even himself, in his epic struggle with the opposite sex. Tragedy is my hangnail, comedy is you trying to get laid.

  • The Elephant Man

Kills me. Absolutely cannot watch this movie with crying. It’s almost unwatchable, what John Hurt goes through in the title role, or how Anthony Hopkins tries to save him.

  • Leaving Las Vegas

You’d think self-destruction wouldn’t get you sympathy. Wrong. This tale of death by booze is one of Nick Cage’s best. What the heck happened to Elizabeth Shue, anyhow? This one killed me too.

  • Castaway

WILSON!!! You know you’ve put your protagonist through hell when the loss of a Wilson volleyball elicits tears. The greatest product placement movie in history, but also a great journey, Fed Ex systems engineer survives a plane crash, surviving on a desert island, building a raft and somehow making it back to civilization to discover his chick married to another guy. Dues!

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Beating Down Your Protagonist (Part 1)
Mar 21st, 2012 by paul peditto

Dues. Gotta pay your dues to sing the blues.

The lead character must pay dues. Is that true?

Sympathy = Punishing Your Protagonist.

Wondering how true is the truism. It’s common for movies to beat down the protagonist. It’s not done randomly. The filmmakers want us, the audience, to react to the beat down. We’re being manipulated and the better the manipulation, the less you realize it’s happening.  How to do we, the audience, respond to the character being put through hell? It may depend on the circumstances…

Let’s say a character is an abusive relationship. We’re rooting for them to escape it, sure. But what if the character could just walk out and leave? Or get a divorce? Our reaction might go from “poor girl” to “what the *&^!, why doesn’t she just split?”  The sympathy factor will be less than if, say, she’s born and married to an abusive 16th Century King.  She has nowhere to turn, divorce not an option. Sympathy is earned through her struggle to survive the marriage forced upon her.

What about a daughter tending to a mother dying of cancer. The daughter wants to do the right thing but the mother dumps on her, relentlessly. Many in the audience might personally relate to the daughter, having to care for elderly parents of their own. The daughter is selfless, self-sacrificing…two big-time sympathy characteristics.

I had a running list of Sympathy and Non-Sympathy traits. A character who is soft spoken, who dies a noble death, who responds to life’s beat down not with anger or cynicism, but with an almost Jesus-like ability to sacrifice one’s self for the sins of others, will always have the audience by the throat.

When it comes time to sell your script, you can bet some producer somewhere will ask why people will pony up $10+ bucks to see your movie. Who are they wanting to take a ride on, who will they root for? Eliciting sympathy isn’t done with smoke and mirrors. It’s done with craft, with storytelling. And with recognizing that your characters have to take a full journey, meaning it’s likely they will have to be beaten down. How?

  1. Nature or natural forces (Titanic, 2012, Twister, The Poseidon Adventure )
  2. An antagonist of far greater strength makes life miserable or causes death and destruction(The Devil Wears Prada, The Crow)
  3. War-time abuse (Schindler’s List, The Deer Hunter, Saving Private Ryan)
  4. Addiction (The Lost Weekend, Days Of Wine And Roses, Black Snake Moan)
  5. Mental or physical illness (The Miracle Worker, SlingBlade)
  6. A crippling or death-dealing accident (Diving Bell and the Butterfly, 21 Grams)
  7. Brainwashing (The Manchurian Candidate)
  8. Loss of job or bad economic conditions (Falling Down, The Grapes Of Wrath)
  9. Religious oppression (Ben Hur, The 10 Commandments, The Rapture)

Here are a few specific examples of character beat down from movies you might know:

  • Breaking The Waves

I’m off Lars Van Trier. Not planning on seeing Melancholia, didn’t see AntiChrist…what’s the point? The Nazi comments at Cannes aside, this guy is all about shock and headline grabbing. Not saying he’s not talented. Breaking The Waves wrecked me. Stars Emily Watson as a simple-minded young Scottish woman who believes that God talks to her, and is instructed by her paralyzed husband (Stellan Skarsgard) to have degrading sex with oil tanker workers, until it kills her. I stumbled out of the theater after this one. If there were ever a doubt that punishing the protagonist works in drawing an audience closer, one need not go past this movie.

It was Dogville, the rape scene with Nicole Kidman, that put me off Van Trier. When my friend wanted to stay for the credit role, I stood up in the theater and screamed at him, for all to hear: “I just sat through 178 minutes of B-U-L-L-S-H-I-T, and you want to watch the &^%$! credits?!” I’m not the first one to notice the punishing of women in Van Trier movies. From the UK Telegraph:

“In von Trier’s controversial musical, Dancer in the Dark (2000), singer Björk largely escaped such physical privations. As Selma, a poverty-stricken Czech immigrant in America, she merely goes blind, murders a man using a safe deposit box and ends up being hanged.

Still, as Björk tells it, filming took a heavy emotional toll on her. She complained that von Trier was “sexist”, and declared she would never work with him again. She has been quoted as saying that he needs actresses to infuse his films with a soul – “and he envies them and hates them for it”.

Nicole Kidman was the next victim. In Dogville (2003), she played a gangster’s moll who arrives in a small, rural American town. She is perceived as an outsider, and the intolerant citizens insist she does demanding chores before submitting her to all kinds of degradation, finally forcing her to wear an iron collar with a bell and weight attached to prevent her escape. She becomes the helpless victim of the sexual whims of several men in the town.

“I don’t think I tortured Nicole on Dogville, but I know she said I was tough,” said von Trier. The two reportedly had tempestuous rows on set. And when I mentioned von Trier’s name to Kidman a year after Dogville’s release, she gave me what might be termed an old-fashioned look.”

Sure, we can scorn the director, but how do we feel about the characters? Do we pity them? Sympathize with them? If I want to elicit a response from a reader-audience member, I’d do well to study the reaction to characters in movies like this. Van Trier uses women badly in his flicks, but he wasn’t the first…

  • The Birds

In fairness, the whole town gets abused by the crazy attacking birds. We focus on Mitch Brenner (Rod Taylor) and family, plus wealthy San Fransisco socialite Melanie Daniels (Tippi Hedren). Terrorized, the back end of the movie has them trapped and defending a house from the constant onslaught. Kinda a no-brainer here–of course we’re rooting for them. The movie has been studied down to the shot, as has Hitchcock’s obsession with Tippi Hedren, and his beat down of women in this and other movies.

  • Gladiator

“Maximus is a powerful Roman general, loved by the people and the aging Emperor, Marcus Aurelius. Before his death, the Emperor chooses Maximus to be his heir over his own son, Commodus, and a power struggle leaves Maximus and his family condemned to death. The powerful general is unable to save his family, and his loss of will allows him to get captured and put into the Gladiator games until he dies. The only desire that fuels him now is the chance to rise to the top so that he will be able to look into the eyes of the man who will feel his revenge.”

Revenge, done well, works. Roman general Maximus (Russell Crowe) has his life ripped from him–friends, family, his Legion, even his rightful appointment as Emperor–by the crafty and ever-ambitous Commodus. We see it happen, every awful step of the way. Nothing he, or we, can do about it. Powerful guy, but it’s all taken from him.We sympathize and root for him to give Joaquin Phoenix, and that freaking annoying scar of his, what for.

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Scene Workshop 1
Mar 14th, 2012 by paul peditto

Dorothy Parker founded the “hate writing, love having written” school. One of her beefs was rewriting.

As every one of us knows, you can stare at a problem scene for hours and just be stuck. You know the damn script better than anyone but it doesn’t help get you to any sort of solution. You can’t figure it out.

Then you get your hands on a friend’s script and can see, clear as day, not just every pimply zit in his script, but the obvious solution to all his life’s troubles.

Why is that?

The pressure is off. It’s always easier to see the errors in the other guy’s script. You have detachment, objectivity. You don’t have four months of writing invested. It’s no sweat to come in and be the hero with your ever-so-unique opinions.
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Rule Breakers: Quentin Tarantino
Mar 6th, 2012 by paul peditto

Might be sacrilege for my 19 year-olds at Columbia College, but no, I don’t love all his movies.

Tarantino, for me, is the mad video clerk who has seen 10,362 movies. He has total recall, can sample, skim, or outright steal from the obscure Korean flick you never saw and do it so artfully, you’ll never know it was ever done. Picasso told us, “good artists borrow, great artists steal.” There’s much more to Tarantino than this aspect, though.

Make no mistake: Tarantino will be around hundreds of years from now. Inglorious Basterds, Pulp Fiction, Kill Bill are for the ages. Are they on my Top 100 stuck-on-a-desert-island list? Hell no. All style, little substance, few female characters of any depth, violence reduced to cartoon level. Bloody body counts rise and I just kinda…shrug. It’s Roadrunner shit, death with no stakes or meaning.

But style…holy Christ, the style! When you get an esque after your name, the debate on whether it was deserved or not is pretty much academic.

Have you read the guy’s scripts? You should.

Just like with Shane Black, by some alchemy, reading a Tarantino script is a unique experience. Nobody writing for genre can write dialogue at his level. The action sequences are unparalleled. One pictures Tarantino at the computer having a grand old time and the reading experience is similar: It’s hellava lotta fun to read his stuff. Breaks tons of rules in the process but it’s utterly beside the point– He tells a story like few others.

How about if we start with his most recent, Inglorious Basterds. Apologies for running the dialogue long, but I want it to sink in: This isn’t even half the scene. We’re talking about one of the most remarkable set piece to open a movie. A 10+ minute dialogue scene OVER A TABLE, totally static except for the camera tilting down to show the Jewish family beneath them, their survival hanging on every word between the farmer and Nazi Hunter. It’s pure Hitchcock, the definition of suspense…but Hitchcock’s bomb under the table is the Jewish family. How many screenwriters have the chops to pull off ten solid minutes of interrogation to open a movie? Tarantino shatters the screenplay manuals that tell the new writer it’s the visual over verbal, show don’t tell.

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