Monthly Archives: January 2010

There are a couple ways to go with Montage format: [scrippet] INT.  PLAZA HOTEL- NEW YORK CITY- NIGHT (MONTAGE) –Freddy Mac and Fanny Mae sip Maine lobster bisque with Merrill Lynch bigwigs. –They munch Free Range Organic Chicken with Bank of American honchos. –They slurp Nutella crepes with Citibank VP’s. END MONTAGE [/scrippet] Or, [scrippet]MONTAGE—FREDDY […]

Try to give your screen direction “white space” (where the camera would naturally cut) wherever possible… [scrippet]I/E. SUV – AFTERNOON A blue SUV speeds down a road surrounded by trees. In the back seat, WILLIAM, 12, doodles in his note book, squashed between his brother J.J., 16, and sister COURTNEY, 14, with headphones, texting on […]

Let’s start with a no-no: Backstory in screen direction: [scrippet]EXT. PARADE ROUTE- BRIGHT DAY Jillian watches as the pageant parade passes, seeming to remember the day she was crowned Miss Southeast Panhandle State 1956. There was a goldenrod sun that day too, and as she drove along waving from the festooned Wheaties Breakfast of Champions […]