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Top 10 Thanksgiving Movies
Nov 22nd, 2015 by paul peditto


Thanksgiving dinners take eighteen hours to prepare. They are consumed in twelve minutes. Half-times take twelve minutes. This is not coincidence.” -Erma Bombeck

This is my Top 10 Thanksgiving movie list circa 2015. Also 2014, 2013 and 2012. This list is old as hell, and for good reason. Classic movies are timeless…

It’s Thanksgiving week, and as with many holiday scenarios, my own Thanksgiving will be spent with family and friends.

In my case, actually, ex-family. I spend the holidays with my brother’s ex-wife’s family.


Being as I live in Chicago, it’s been convenient through the years to head up to Wisconsin for Thanksgiving. Quick 90-minute car ride, nice scenery. Those folks always liked me more than my brother, even when he was still married to their daughter.

If you’ve missed one of these, maybe while you’re recovering from the tryptophan high of dark meat, mashed potatoes, yams with marshmallows, cranberry sauce and all the rest of it, you can catch one of these….



A demonic turkey is unleashed…and he’s one fowl-mouthed bastard! Five college kids: a jock, a good girl, an overweight red-neck, a slut, and a nerd head home for Thanksgiving break, each thankful for the chance of holiday hookups. But when their car suddenly overheats, they trespass into the woods for a night of drinking and bonfire debauchery. Little do they know, these are the same woods where an ancient turkey was necromanced 386 years ago by an Indian curse after the very first Thanksgiving. Now, The Killer Turkey is awakened and ready for revenge on the first white men he comes in contact with!”

Now THAT’S a concept! Tha-tha-that’s entertainment!

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As good as it got for Pauly Shore, the family Thanksgiving dinner is proceeded with the immortal words, “Let’s munch some grindage!”


John Hughes is for the ages. John Candy, also gone. They are missed. I’ve seen this and Weird Science about 20 times. An advertising executive who just wants to fly home to spend Thanksgiving with his family is stuck with a loud but lovable salesman during an unbelievable succession of blizzards, transfers, strikes, and delays. The Citizen Kane of Thanksgiving movies.


Woody Allen’s 1986 drama about three sisters. The film’s set piece is Thanksgiving, where Hannah’s (Mia Farrow) clan gathers together in a tremendous Central Park West apartment for the holiday celebration. Hearts are broken and mended, everybody talks way too much, a typical Woody Allen drama, but one of this best.


NOT a popcorn movie. Totally depressing, actually. But with a couple scenes that can match any movie. I’m talking about the swinging 70’s key party, and the tragic climax coming down on Thanksgiving Day. Starring Kevin Kline, Joan Allen, Sigourney Weaver, and young rising stars Tobey Maguire, Elijah Wood and Christina Ricci.


It’s the holidays, it’s Charlie Brown, what more do you need to know?


Hoping to earn extra money over the Thanksgiving break, an innocent and reserved scholarship student at an exclusive prep school agrees to look after a blind, retired Lieutenant Colonel, who takes him off for a wild weekend in New York City. Has the famous Pacino dance scene at the end.


Maybe my favorite Paul Newman flick in his later years. Earned him an Oscar nomination. His character is an old codger who takes no shit from anyone. Set in and around Thanksgiving.


Parker Posey won a Special Recognition award at the 1997 Sundance Film Festival for her out-of-control eccentric performance as Jackie-O. Truly warped in her pill-box hats, flying into a rage when her incestuous relationship is challenged as her older brother (Josh Hamilton) brings home a girlfriend (Tori Spelling) for Thanksgiving.


Terrence Malick takes his time unfolding this new take on the Pocahontas story. Some people don’t have the patience for Malick. I’m not one of them. This is pure poetry.


Can cute, edgy Katie Holmes really cook a turkey? The ex-Mrs. Tom Cruise plays the black sheep of her family, working to prepare a Thanksgiving dinner for the clan in her tiny apartment with a broken stove. How can Mrs. Tom Cruise be the star of my favorite Thanksgiving movie? I don’t know, but she is. This movie packed a punch when I first saw it almost a decade ago, and still does. Check it out if you haven’t yet.

“As we express our gratitude, we must never forget that the highest appreciation is not to utter words, but to live by them.”-John Fitzgerald Kennedy

Best Sex Scenes
Nov 16th, 2015 by paul peditto


“Ecstasy … is not to be communicated by a couple of people, or one person, or any combinations there of, unless it’s actually happening … [Ecstasy] is really not part of the thing we can do on celluloid.”– ORSON WELLS

Orson Wells was well known for a lack of sex scenes in his movies. That’s why this article about a porn film he notoriously was rumored to have edited(not shot) was news to me. The ultimate high-brow directing working on a low brow flick?! Interesting! The film was 3 A.M. The connection was to Wells’ last film, The Other Side Of The Wind. From the article…

“3 A.M. was directed by Gary Graver, Welles’s cinematographer on The Other Side of the Wind. (The productions have several crew members in common.)…

Welles’s presence in the editing suite was owed to his own impatience. He’d been working with Graver on The Other Side of the Wind, his unfinished project shot over seven years. Alas, Welles didn’t have the budget to pay the crew. To offset this volunteerism, Graver, who had a family to provide for, worked on erotic films. As McBride wrote, Welles in turn …

… reciprocated by working without credit on one of Graver’s hard-core films, 3 A.M. Fuming that Graver was busy editing it instead of working on his projects, Welles volunteered to cut a sequence to speed the film’s completion. The star of 3 A.M., Georgina Spelvin, proudly told me that Welles was responsible for the dynamic editing of her masturbation scene in a shower…”

The clip they link to is rare and racy and it got me thinking about doing a couple posts of the Best Sex scenes in the movies. Of course you can click on Google for a dozen similar lists but this will be a Script Gods Must Die special… guaranteed to elicit a couple huuuuuuuh’s????!! from you, Good Reader, but it’ll be fun. Script first, then the scene clip(if available). Let’s go to the sexy videotape!


I’m going to stay non-conventional with this list but some classics simply will not be left asunder. I remember reading Tony Curtis’ take on this scene, how kissing Marilyn Monroe was like “kissing Hitler”. Not sure of the context of that quote but I imagine about a million guys would have been thrilled to be a stand-in here. What a kiss! Script, then scene…



Joe and Sugar are still in the same embrace.  The radio 
music continues.  Finally they break.

			(waiting for
			the verdict)
			Well - ?

			I'm not quite sure.  Try it again.

She does.  As they break, she looks at him - the suspense is 

			(trying to
			diagnose it)
			I got a funny sensation in my toes - like
			somebody was barbecuing them over a
			slow flame.

			Lets throw another log on the fire.

Another kiss.

			I think you're on the right track.

			I must be - because your glasses are
			beginning to steam up.

She kisses him again.


59.	INT.  ROADHOUSE - NIGHT.				59.

Osgood and Jerry have now got the tango by the throat.  
Jerry is dancing with his back to the CAMERA, and as 
Osgood whips him around, we see that Jerry has the flower 
clamped between his teeth.  They reverse positions again, 
and Osgood grabs the flower between his teeth.



The radio is still on, and Joe and Sugar are just coming out 
of their last kiss.  Joe removes his glasses, which are now 
completely fogged up.

			I never knew it could be like this.

			Thank you.

			They told me I was caputt - finished -
			washed up - and now you're making
			a chump out of all those experts.

			Mineral baths - now really!

			Where did you learn to kiss like that?

			Oh, you know - Junior League - charity
			bazaars - I used to sell kisses for the
			Milk Fund.

They kiss again.

			(going, going, gone)
			Tomorrow, remind me to send a check
			for a hundred thousand dollars to the
			Milk Fund.

She doesn't have to kiss him any more - he takes over now.

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Great Scenes: The Death Of Blatty
Nov 8th, 2015 by paul peditto


Today let’s go back to our clips/scripts series of great scenes. We’ll look at the script for Blade Runner, the final fight sequence between Blatty (Rutger Hauer) and Deckard (Harrison Ford). This is the Hampton Fancher/David Peoples draft dated February 1981. Not sure which draft this is, but it;s very different from the theatrical version of the movie. Because of that, it’s an interesting choice to examine.

This is a favorite scene of mine because of the humanity on display–by the replicant. When Roy sees Deckard desperately hanging on the ledge, something in his mind becomes absolutely human. He will not only NOT kill him, but actually save him from sure death. But he waits until Deckard actually loses his grip before he grabs him.

In that last second, it’s the replicant hunter–Deckard–who can finally feel for the beings he’s been hunting. So there’s a reversal for both characters. The hunter becomes the hunted. At the top and throughout the movie Deckard never experiences such humanity. And then comes the Hauer monologue to Vangelis music that is not in the script…Oh!

To die for…seriously. Couldn’t you go to your grave if you had authored just one moment like that would last a hundred years?

A large piece of this scene is in the Youtube video below.

Let’s look at the script(some trims included):



Deckard looks around the corner of the door down the
hall. Batty’s at the other end. Except for jockstrap
and gym shoes, he’s nude.

You wanna play?

Deckard FIRES. Batty’s fast. He ducks into a doorway.
Pops out again.

Not very sporting to fire on an
unarmed opponent. I thought you
were supposed to be good. Aren’t
you the man?!

The makeup on Batty’s face is somewhere between a Coman-
che warrior and a transvestite. The immensity of his
insolence awesome — the muscles of his body are swol-
len, trembling from the thrill of it.

This is how we do it up there, lad!
Come on!

In a blue of lightning-like action, Batty whips down the
hall, zigzagging off the walls towards Deckard so fast
that Deckard gets only three SHOTS off before the blur
crashes through the wall on his left with a laugh.

Deckard stands there a moment — digesting the impact
of it, then edges up to the gaping wall. Batty is be-
hind him.

He knees Deckard in the back and slaps him in the head.
Deckard goes to his knees, then over on his face.
Batty kneels next to him.

Not hurt, are you? You better get
it up or I’m going to have to kill
you. Unless you’re alive you can’t
play. And if you don’t play, you
don’t get to be alive.

Deckard’s eyes are closed, mouth bleeding. He exhales
and makes and effort. He slides his hands up even with
his chest and starts to push.

That’s the spirit.

Like a matador, Batty walks away. By the time Deckard’s
on his feet, Batty’s disappeared through one of the

Deckard wipes the blood from his mouth, bends down and
picks up his laser, reloads and looks down the hall,
towards the jeering voice.

Come on, Deckard, show me what you
got! I’m right here on the other
side of the door. But you gotta
shoot straight ’cause I’m fast!

Deckard gets to the door, BLASTS it, kicks it open and
FIRES at Batty. But it’s only the reflection of Batty.

He’s backing Deckard out the door. Deckard trips and
falls. There’s fear on his face. The strength is gone.
Something is starting to crack.

What’s wrong? Aren’t you a lover
of Faster, Bigger and Better?!

Deckard’s pedaling backwards over the floor.

It’s time to die.

Deckard throws the laser at him. It misses. Batty
throws his head back and laughs. A one-eyed colossus
about to eat the world. Suddenly he stops. His eye
moves over the wall.

Playing with him! Blatty could kill Deckard, but he’s teaching him a lesson…what it feels like to fear. Deckard might have the laser but Blatty is in control– “a one-eyed colossus”–beautifully described.  The descriptive language fast, to-the-death crosscutting.

34361As mentioned previously, I’m not sure what draft this is, but check out how different the script ending is from the final movie. Screen the YouTube clip below while reading this. Don’t know about you, but there’s no comparison for me–movie over script:


 Provocation accomplished. Batty smiles and walks lei-
 surely towards the door. Deckard's terrified scream
 and the SOUND of GLASS CRASHING stop him. Batty speeds
 up and moves into the room.

 The window pane is splattered, curtains sucked out,
 bellowing in the wind.


 He walks up to the window. Deckard comes away from the
 wall, inching up behind him, laser in both hands, aimed
 at the base of Batty's skull. Batty starts to lean
 over, but even before his eyes see the pavement, he
 knows. He spins...

 Deckard FIRES again. This one goes home. Batty falls
 like he was poleaxed, hits the floor dead weight.

 Deckard starts to tremble. His arms go limp as his
 head tilts back and he closes his eyes. He can breathe
 On the floor, Batty's hand is crawling toward Deckard's

 With the unsuspected abruptness of a man slipping on a
 banana peel, Deckard comes down. Face knotted in hor-
 ror, he EMPTIES THE LASER in Batty's body -- but the
 hand holds on. With a screech of frustration he drops
 the laser and like an animal claws at Batty's dead
 fingers -- but the fingers are welded shut.

 Deckard starts to crawl, pulling Batty behind him. He
 struggled through the door and stumbles to his feet.


 Deckard plunges down the corridor dragging Batty along.
 He falls, gets to one foot, falls again and crawls the
 last couple feet to the stairwell.


 Groaning, he tugs and pulls, hauls and heaves Batty's
 body to the edge of the landing. He pauses for breath,
 then lays back, wedging his feet against Batty's shoul-
 ders and pushes. Inch by inch the body goes over the
 edge. Then all at once it drops. But the hand holds
 and the weight of the body takes Deckard with it. As
 Deckard slides over the edge, he grabs hold of the

 Deckard's hanging three hundred feet over the basement
 floor, supporting himself and Batty's corpse -- almost
 four hundred pounds of stress on his fingers.
 With his free foot he chops away at Batty's hand, try-
 ing to break it loose. But it's not working. Deckard's
 fingers are starting to slip.

 His face is a mask of agony as he wedges his heel over
 Batty's thumb. With the help of gravity and everything
 he's got in his right leg to push with, he pushes. The
 thumb breaks loose. Batty falls.

 Deckard doesn't notice. He's in an awkward position.
 He must reverse the way he's facing to pull himself up.
 He lets go with his right hand and crosses it over the
 left. Then turns the left around so he's got an over-
 hand grip.

 Like a man doing his last pull-up... the one that can't
 be done, Deckard pulls himself up, throws a foot over
 the edge and grapples and heaves and wiggled himself
 onto the cold solid steel of the stairwell landing.

 And lies there, body jerking spasmodically, slowly
 clenching and unclenching his cramped hand, but it's
 his burning cheek against the cool metal he's most aware

 Dizzy, hot, lungs on fire, he stands -- and putting one
 foot in front of the other, Deckard descends the stairs.

Script Magazine Series, Part 4
Nov 2nd, 2015 by paul peditto

script_logoLet’s continue with our look into some of the best Script Magazine posts. To check out the full list of Script Mag contributors, go here. Website home page is here. A column of my own stuff appears here.


index  There’s a shamanism to being a writer. It involves breaking out of your own head and becoming a character that has little or nothing to do with your own life or POV. How well one does that might very well determine your success as a writer. So yeah, when I read a pro’s POV on how they interpret my script–that’s of interest to me. Most interesting about this article from Nathan Blair is that it’s from a Director of Photography’s point of view. How does a DP see the script? How can you write more visually, to appeal to the eye of the man/woman who is going to make all the Paris-Is-Burning images in your mind happen? Read the article and get enlightened.



index  Damn! Look at that screenplay page above… My own notes used to look like that before Columbia College moved to digital homework. I would spend 30 minutes handwriting notes on a page like that not thinking the student would have NO FUCKING CLUE what I was saying.  That’s why I was glad to find another excellent article from Stewart Farquhar about format differences between shooting and spec scripts. This article provides invaluable advice. Here’s a taste:

“There is one requirement all agree on; “DON’T BORE ME.” After that comes the page format. Readers and development execs who read expect to see certain components for a spec script in a definite style on the page. Lean is in, pedantic and descriptive prose is out. No technical direction and everything shorter (including the script).
Production and shooting scripts have a myriad of instructions on the page. For example it is not uncommon to find some if not all of the following in a shooting script: ANGLE ON, ANOTHER ANGLE, CLOSE ON, CRANE SHOT, DOLLY WITH, ECU, PAN, POV, PULL BACK TO REVEAL, TRUCK, ZIP PAN, WE SEE, WE HEAR, ZOOM, etc. in addition to editing directions: CUT TO, DISSOLVE TO, IRIS, WIPE. Unless it is absolutely necessary for the story, and then only sparingly, do not include any of the editing directions. It will do at least two things that will not endear to the other trades, 1) slow down the read and; 2) rank you as an amateur writer. Your goal in a spec script is to dazzle a READER with your story teller skill not to direct and /or edit a film.”

new-header I recently did a webinar for Screenwriting University on True Story Characters. The territory covered here wonderfully by writer/producer/director Bob Boris is similar– trying to help you get your arms around writing a True Story Screenplay. Let’s take a quick timeout and go to the Black List website. Go to their archive of spec scripts down through the years. Pick a year. Now tell me how many are in the list and how many are TRUE STORY inspired. A shitload, yes? Want to see the genesis of the True Story movie down through the years? Look what the elves at Wikipedia have put together. True Story movies from the dawn of cinema to today. What you see is an explosion in that sub-genre. Shit you not–if I’m not writing a micro-budget today, if I’m going Indie, then the only Indie spec I’m writing is a True Story.

All this to say, this article is a good information source from Bob Boris–an interview where he expands on writing fictional screenplays inspired by true events. Check out the article. Here’s a taste:

“A movie is a movie… It is not a front page article in the New York Times. The screenwriter should interpret historical events, not unlike Shakespeare did! The writer needs to be as close to the truth as good drama permits. The writer cannot break the fifth wall of reality. If Russell Crowe was wearing his Rolex in the arena, it throws the whole movie into the wood chipper. Professional writers know that. Telling the true story makes its own demands. Don’t be stupid. Don’t play fast and lose with the facts. Maintain the truth, or as close to it as possible…and the audience will accept the film as a true story. The moment you lose them – give them something clearly false? They are gone for good!”



index Movies = moving pictures. Film as visual medium. The manipulation of     I M A G E S for emotional impact. The written word– the screenplay– is there to fill in the gap of what can’t be communicated visually. Hitchcock is studied in every film school in the country for a reason. The dude could screw with your mind– How? Juxtaposition of I M A G E S manipulated to evoke specific reactions. Far too often the screenwriter just kills us with words when words aren’t called for. A greater understanding of images and symbols is called for. Thus, I include this epic poem to film symbolism written by John Fraim. Nicely done, John–this one really made me think. Here’s a piece:

“Yet in the vast majority of films, their images don’t go anywhere… The result is that many films, unsure of their central image, unwilling to invoke the power of the single image, bombard viewers with too many images. The shotgun effect of images in modern films create what media theorist Marshall McLuhan might term “hot” images allowing for little participation by the audience. This onslaught of images are “broadcast” 24/7 through modern films like continuous images from cable news networks.

Films need to cut the machine-gun spray of small, lifeless images and focus on creating a few images full of life. They need to call back what McLuhan would term “cool” images, or images that are incomplete, requiring in depth participation by viewers in decoding their message. They need to create images that suggest rather than define, that expand meaning rather than deflate it.”


Format Smorgasbord
Oct 26th, 2015 by paul peditto


I don’t know why I picked this photo to start this post. Sure, the sexy Swede on the left can’t hurt. Closer to the truth though is it reminds me of my all-time fav all-you-can-eat joint in Chicago, the Red Apple. Red Apple is Polish, not Swedish, $20 fish all-in which includes the 20% tip for the Polish gal who served you the Coke and nothing else in an outfit like the one above. Tip her, rise for the Kielbasa and 20 or so sauerkraut pierogis you attempt to ingest, and stumble back out onto Milwaukee Avenue…

All of which has zero to do with format. Format–I haven’t written about it in quite a while. You didn’t miss much. Format isn’t sexy. Never has been, never will be. Hard to get excited about it. Problem is–well, there are lots of problems with a format discussion. Starting with the N O I S E of conflicting advice.

Product and packaging. Content and style. Story and characters will sell your movie. But the packaging has to be there too. And on the internet, there is endless debate on how to package. All I can tell you, Good Reader, is that those who deal in screenwriting absolutes, lie.

There are a million posts on ten thousand websites telling you how to format. These come from self-proclaimed experts to newbies to people with agendas to screenwriting message board trolls with nothing better to do with their afternoons. I don’t know what motivates these people. Me? I’ve got a blog to write and we haven’t talked format in awhile so…let’s talk some basics, what to use or what not to use.

What I’m going to give you are tendencies, stylistic choices. I am not going to tell you your drama must be between 90 and 110 pages. Do I personally try to keep within those bounds? Yes sir, I do. But maybe your story demands more length. The trolls will scream about the The Social Network script weighing in at 161 pages–don’t let page count Nazis stop you from telling your story!!!

True. If Social Network gets 161, so do you…long as you bring the same creative game as Aaron Freakin’ Sorkin–because if you don’t, and you write it at 161, I’m thinking you’ll have plenty of time for those screenwriting message boards.

Story is what sells your movie. Format is the packaging of story. Onto the packaging advice….


7492928_f520  INT. and EXT. don’t need much explaining. Next part is the location. Please, no two line sluglines, keep locations concise. For the third part, time frame, I personally prefer just five of them: DAY, NIGHT, LATER, SAME, CONTINUOUS. These five cover every contingency in your screenplay day. Is DAWN wrong? Nope. How about EARLY AFTERNOON? You can write that too. I’m giving you a stylistic choice. I’m all about moving the reader’s eye down the page, the proverbial fast read. One short word, DAY, instead of two longer words, EARLY AFTERNOON, does that for me. This stuff seems like small potatoes but consider this: You write a hundred or more sluglines per script. The small stuff adds up.


Shot list

Directing your film in the action lines is amateur hour. Cue the trolls informing me that Birdman, the movie I picked as best of the year is LOADED with camera directions. Not to mention Gangs Of New York, From Russia With Love and God knows how many others dating back to the silent film era. Doesn’t that make it ok if you, Good Reader, want to place a poetic camera angle or two (or twenty) into the script?

Sure, go ahead. What did I say before? No absolutes. And without descending into pointless screenwriting diarrhea debate, let me just point out a common sense fact that Birdman was co-written by the director, an established Hollywood player with major movies to his credit. Is that you? Are you bankrolled and directing the thing? If so, feel free to write those angles into the script itself. If not, why the hell not put them into a SHOT LIST, on the side of the script. If you’re not directing and attract interest in the project, perhaps one day the director will invite you to the meetings with the DP when they put the shot list together. Perhaps, too, the Cubs will win the World Series after 101 years of North Side suffering.


quote-everything-we-hear-is-an-opinion-not-a-fact-everything-we-see-is-a-perspective-not-the-truth-marcus-aurelius-8683 “BLACK. We hear a clock ticking.”– Birdman

That’s the script opening of the best movie of the year. So why can’t you use we see/we hear? You can. There are no hard/fast rules concerning we see/hear. It’s a stylistic choice. Would I recommend using them?


Why not? I want a screenplay to fly, to not stop the tired eyes of the reader. Action lines by definition are what the camera is seeing and hearing now. Who is in the shot and what is happening. Soooooo….why do I need WE SEE? This isn’t a deal breaker, it’s a head scratcher for me. People say it helps visualize the story. I don’t get the argument. Again, Good Reader, it’s your call.


indexScreenwriters have heard this one since their first teething ring. Give white space. Keep action line paragraphs to five and under. Multiple paragraphs are ok but give white space. Develop the cut instinct. Minimize minimize minimize…so why did the writers of Gangs Of New York not get the memo?

Look at these passages…

“Amsterdam grabs the tortoise handle of the knife, PULLS on it. Vallon tries not to cry out. The knife does not move. Amsterdam tries again. He can’t budge the knife. Vallon MOANS. Nearly wild, Amsterdam PULLS with all his strength. Vallon SCREAMS in agony. Amsterdam is pulling so hard he raises his father’s back four inches off the ground. Still the knife will not move. Vallon passes out from the pain. Now, finally, someone steps forward: Monk Eastman. He leans over but Amsterdam, berserk with grief, pushes him away, turns back to his father, and, with a last desperate pull, DRAWS the knife from his father’s heart. He throws it on the ground. Monk picks it up, wipes the blade on his arm, closes the knife and hands it to Amsterdam.”

As the sun goes down, we have our first full look (MATTE) at the low pale outlines of the city. The harbor is crowded with the high masts of sailing ships. Just north of the island tip is the steeple of the city’s tallest structure, Trinity Church. The buildings of Wall Street are masses of concrete and wood, the streets surrounding them paved with cobblestones. Just above the financial district are the sloping buildings and rutted avenue of the Five Points . The Old Brewery stands tall and forbidding over Paradise Square. Above the Five Points, in the distance, we can glimpse some finer, newer buildings. One wide street–Broadway–seems to run from the very tip of the island clear up into the woods just a few miles north of the harbor. The only SOUNDS are the lapping of the harbor water against the boats, the creaking of masts in the winter WIND.”

Beautiful, sure. But don’t they feel like they’re out of a novel? You’ll need to weigh just how dense you want to make your own screen direction. I’m from the less is more school and would recommend treading lightly here.

  • CUT TO

I used to debate stuff like this. I used to have political debates too, but with the acquisition of age, it fell away from my landscape. I remember one such debate with my brother Chris who works for HBO. He, writing his own script, chiding me when I told him to dump every last CUT TO he wrote in his script. Informing me that in his HBO capacity had seen “tons” of scripts that wrote in CUT TO. I, of course, know full well that if you go to Drew’s Script O Rama or SIMPLY SCRIPTS or IMSDB for every ten scripts you’ll find two or three that use CUT TO. So what should you do, Good Reader?

No right or wrong. This isn’t the stuff that’s going to make or break your script.

Would I, personally, recommend using CUT TO?

Hell no.

When it comes time to edit this movie, unless you’re the director you’re not gonna be anywhere near the edit room, so why are you telling me how you would edit it? Because it’s your job as writer to inform me of the movie in your mind? Screw that. A new slugline by definition tells me I’m in a new scene. That’s clarity. How I get from one scene to the next, be it a DISSOLVE or SMASH CUT, is not your call.

Cue the trolls.


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